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Steph_Luvs_Mark Full Time Regular
Number of posts : 492 Age : 30 Location : Caerdydd - Cymru :) Fave Member : Orange Head :) Registration date : 2008-05-13
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Wed 22 Jul 2009, 8:44 pm | |
| Oh my days This was BRILLIANT! I had a grin spread across my face as i read it all. Poor Karen not getting anywhere with Jason! And i can't believe after everything Mary and Mark went through that night they only ended up kissing! Ahhhh this was awesome guys, seriously Can't wait to read the ones for the other cities! Hahaa! Could you guys possibly think of anymore things for you and Take That to get up to? Haha xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx | |
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Zouba Probably a Lost Cause
Number of posts : 16420 Age : 43 Location : London, for a year Fave Member : Gary Registration date : 2008-03-19
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Wed 22 Jul 2009, 8:48 pm | |
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karenc Staff
Number of posts : 21868 Age : 40 Location : Not quite sure... Fave Member : Mr Orange Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Wed 22 Jul 2009, 8:49 pm | |
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elaine 79 May Have No Life
Number of posts : 1766 Age : 45 Location : off in Rob land..... Fave Member : Rob/Gary Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Wed 22 Jul 2009, 8:49 pm | |
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karenc Staff
Number of posts : 21868 Age : 40 Location : Not quite sure... Fave Member : Mr Orange Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Wed 22 Jul 2009, 8:50 pm | |
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karenc Staff
Number of posts : 21868 Age : 40 Location : Not quite sure... Fave Member : Mr Orange Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Wed 22 Jul 2009, 8:50 pm | |
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Chantal Top Of The Regulars
Number of posts : 932 Age : 33 Location : Sleepwalking in TT's Circus where my world comes alive... Fave Member : Gary and his Blue magical hotness! =) Registration date : 2008-02-19
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Wed 22 Jul 2009, 9:40 pm | |
| Heya!!! It's me again....FBing while I'm reading PART 2!! So everything that's written now didn't happen,right? Like Mary meeting mark outside? Cauz that's what happens most of the time with fans who eat at the restaurant and end up in the bar... - karenc wrote:
- he tripped over something and ended up with his face in her cleavage.
OMG, I just snorted reading that and had to cover my mouth cuz my cousins just gave me weird looks!!! - karenc wrote:
- Mary had gone out and offered to help him and he had flung his arms around her giving her a big hug and a wet sloppy kiss on the cheek!
OMG, I would just DIE of laughter if it were me, even if he just kissed me, hahaha!! If this happened to you....then, !!! - karenc wrote:
- “Oh no we’re staying somewhere much classier than this”
“Really?” “Yeah you may have heard of it, it’s called Travelodge. £29 per night and we get towels and a couple of really noisy people next door to us thrown in with the price!!” This is just too funny!!! - karenc wrote:
- “Mary what’s your problem, won’t you tell meeeeeee where you’re froooommmm, cos I like youuuuuuuuuu and you’re helping me so come on, come, come, come, come into the lift” he motioned as the doors opened “sha la la la la la you’re Maryyyyyyyyyy, sha la la la la la I’m drunkkk…” then the doors closed and the lift started moving upwards.
OMG, PMSLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - karenc wrote:
- “Wheeeeeeeeeee” he said as the lift kept going down until it reached the ground floor again.
OMg, I just let out one big laugh!! Sorry if I keep commenting on how about I just laughed or giggled at this and that but I'm FBing while reading, I LOVE to FB!!!! - karenc wrote:
- “Nooooo” Mary sighed and pressed the button to wait for it coming back down, meanwhile Mark was chatting to random people still in the lobby and came across the driver of the taxi for the girls
Hahahaha!!!! - karenc wrote:
- “Can I walk you to your room?” he asked with a bright shining smile
“Yeah ok then, it’s room 415” Huh? I thought u were staying at the travelodge...? - karenc wrote:
- “Here, let me help” Mark grinned and tipped the contents of her bag out onto the floor
“Lipstick, nope not it” he said tossing it behind him “Ipod, nah don’t think that will work…money, well I might take a bribe if we can’t find your key” he winked “Ah ha!!!!!” he said jumping up and waving it around OMG, hahaha, he's like a child!!!! I can SO see him do that!!! - karenc wrote:
- “What the hell’s going on?” a grumpy looking Gary announced as he opened the door to find a pair of drunk giggling idiots at his door
“Hellooooooooooooo Garyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy” Mary giggled and then turned to look at Mark, both of them confused “Why are you in Mary’s room?” Mark asked “Eh? This is my room you daft sods and some of us were trying to sleep” “Nice slippers and PJ’s grandad Gaz” Mark sniggered, but wasn’t quick enough to move as Gary slapped the side of his head OH MY GOOOOOOOD !!!!!!!! I just literally almost spit my diet coke !!! And now that I've continued reading, u were drunk off ur mind to remember u were actually staying at the Travelodge! LOL! - karenc wrote:
- “This one might be but the one in my room isn’t” he grinned “Don’t look so scared I don’t bite, honest! Well unless you want me to of course”
“Good grief” I rolled my eyes and stood up “Come on then Mr O, lead the way!” OMG, Jason sounded like...JASON! And OMG, because of Stephie's weird and funniest dream ever with Jay having an Orange for a head, I read 'Mr. potatoe head' instead of 'Mr O'!! - karenc wrote:
- “What’s going on ere eh?” Mark grinned, as Jason quickly stepped to the side
OMG NO HE RUINED EVERYTHING !!!!!!!! OMG, I shook my head and laughed when I read that!! Seriously, my face went from 'Ohhhh! ' when I read the interesting part with u and Jay in the elevator to ' NOOOOO!!!!!' hahahahaaaaa !!! - karenc wrote:
- “Ohhhh that was your taxi? Shit…” Mark giggled
“Maaarkkkk” we all said in unison as I let out a sigh OH MY GOD, ROFLLMFAOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW I JUST SPIT MY COKE ON MY JEANS !!!!!!!!!!! *goes and gets changed* *back* OMG, I was still giggling as I changed my pants!!!! My lil' cousin saw me spit my coke and went 'Chantal, are u okay? Ur crying!! ' and I kept laughing (cuz I'm babysitting the kids tonight) and said 'no, no!! I'm reading a story where my favorite singer makes me cry of laughter! ' and he went like ' a man should never make a girl cry Mommy said' and i was like ' !!!' and held my stomach for a few minutes, still laughing before I could calm down and get changed in giggles...and be back here, still giggling in front of my comp, trying to explain the whole thing without saying that FFMark is drunk and being silly cuz he's 9 years old, LOL!! AWSOME FF, SERIOUSLY!!! | |
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karenc Staff
Number of posts : 21868 Age : 40 Location : Not quite sure... Fave Member : Mr Orange Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Wed 22 Jul 2009, 9:53 pm | |
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Chantal Top Of The Regulars
Number of posts : 932 Age : 33 Location : Sleepwalking in TT's Circus where my world comes alive... Fave Member : Gary and his Blue magical hotness! =) Registration date : 2008-02-19
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 12:23 am | |
| PART 2 ctd - karenc wrote:
- “Hellooooooooooo Jasooonnnnnnnnnnn” Mark could be heard from outside the door, along with giggles from Mary
Awwwwwwww nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - karenc wrote:
- “Cos you’re too inebriated to even remember your own name, now go” he opened the door and gestured for them to leave
“Oooh someone’s knickers are in a knot…” OMG, !!! - karenc wrote:
- “I have an idea, let’s go outside first instead of getting the key”
SHIT!!!! LOL !!!! - karenc wrote:
- Mark Owen was stood in front of her in very tight, very wet CK pants.
JUMP! JUMP! JUMP! - karenc wrote:
- “What the fuck?” he heard Jason shout as Mary turned to him and started singing
“The windows now broken and nobody answers the phone, you’re here on your own” LMFAO !!!!!!!!!! NICE CHAPTER !!!! OMG, I need to read more!!!!! t's just SO SO funny!!!! | |
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Chantal Top Of The Regulars
Number of posts : 932 Age : 33 Location : Sleepwalking in TT's Circus where my world comes alive... Fave Member : Gary and his Blue magical hotness! =) Registration date : 2008-02-19
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 12:25 am | |
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Chantal Top Of The Regulars
Number of posts : 932 Age : 33 Location : Sleepwalking in TT's Circus where my world comes alive... Fave Member : Gary and his Blue magical hotness! =) Registration date : 2008-02-19
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 2:28 am | |
| - karenc wrote:
- “Watch it little man, Or two bodies will be getting buried out there, you’re small, you would fit in Mary’s hole!” I stood with my hands on my hips looking mad as Jason let out a laugh and Mary blushed
“I’m sure I’d fit very well in your hole Mary and I’ll apologise for disturbing you mate when you were trying to explore Karen’s” Mark said letting out a loud belly laugh before turning to reception to ask for a key.
“Mark said he’d fit well in my hole” she sighed and her eyes glazed over
OMG LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - karenc wrote:
- Contact was broken when there was a bang on the door.
“Mark, piss off and go to bed…you’re one annoying little shit, do you know that?” Jason yelled, making me jump at the anger starting to show in his tone “I don’t know what the fuck Marky boy has done but I’d sure as hell like to find out” “Shit” Jason muttered and got up to answer the door to an amused looking Howard who looked at him in his boxers and then back to me “Ah looks like I interrupted a party” he grinned, wiggling his eyebrows ROOOOOOOFFFFFFFLLLLLLLLLLL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *holding her stomach of laughing* OMFG, I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS SHORT STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA !!!!! I can SO picture Doug wriggling his eyebrows like thaaaaaaat !!!!! - karenc wrote:
- “OH FOR FUCK SAKE!!!” He almost growled and moved my hand back to his boxers
“Kazza! If you’re in there, stop groping the oranges and answer the door” Mary shouted a bit too loudly, causing an old couple to stop and tut then carry on to the lifts. “I’m going to commit a murder” I almost yelled before getting up and throwing the robe back on. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :fight: - karenc wrote:
- “Oh Mazza how did it come to this eh?”
“I dunno, how did it ever come to this Kazza?” she sighed before we looked at each other and burst out laughing. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww !!!!! - karenc wrote:
- “What happens in Cardiff, stays in Cardiff!!!!”
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW !!!!!!!!!!!!!! NICE ENDING!!!!!! OMG, I enjoyed this FF so very freakin' muuuuuuuuuuuuuuch!!!!!!!!! If this one, I liked...then I am curious to read a FF of yours and if I really like it and keep reading it...I might leave u (long and annoying typical hyper crazy horny - sometimes LOL- me) comments!! AWSOME ONE SHOT!!! I LOVED IT!!!! | |
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karenc Staff
Number of posts : 21868 Age : 40 Location : Not quite sure... Fave Member : Mr Orange Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 9:35 am | |
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Hids Top of the Stalkers
Number of posts : 6597 Age : 47 Location : On the yellow brick road Fave Member : Jason Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 9:45 am | |
| Well that certainly made me laugh - loved it although damn Mary for interrupting - you should kick her (gently though )......but really you should go to Glasgow and try again so you might actually get there (you'd be needing room 9 ) | |
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karenc Staff
Number of posts : 21868 Age : 40 Location : Not quite sure... Fave Member : Mr Orange Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 9:56 am | |
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Hids Top of the Stalkers
Number of posts : 6597 Age : 47 Location : On the yellow brick road Fave Member : Jason Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 10:01 am | |
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karenc Staff
Number of posts : 21868 Age : 40 Location : Not quite sure... Fave Member : Mr Orange Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 10:14 am | |
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Mary Maybe a Lost Cause
Number of posts : 13196 Age : 36 Fave Member : Robbie with a bit of Mark on the side! Registration date : 2008-02-01
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Hids Top of the Stalkers
Number of posts : 6597 Age : 47 Location : On the yellow brick road Fave Member : Jason Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 10:28 am | |
| I think you should Mary or you might be getting some of (not from me though you understand ) | |
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karenc Staff
Number of posts : 21868 Age : 40 Location : Not quite sure... Fave Member : Mr Orange Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 10:36 am | |
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Mary Maybe a Lost Cause
Number of posts : 13196 Age : 36 Fave Member : Robbie with a bit of Mark on the side! Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 10:37 am | |
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karenc Staff
Number of posts : 21868 Age : 40 Location : Not quite sure... Fave Member : Mr Orange Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 10:42 am | |
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Mary Maybe a Lost Cause
Number of posts : 13196 Age : 36 Fave Member : Robbie with a bit of Mark on the side! Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 10:43 am | |
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Alison Top Of The Regulars
Number of posts : 787 Age : 51 Fave Member : Jason Orange Registration date : 2009-04-06
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 2:01 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 3:14 pm | |
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Mary Maybe a Lost Cause
Number of posts : 13196 Age : 36 Fave Member : Robbie with a bit of Mark on the side! Registration date : 2008-02-01
| Subject: Re: What Happens In Cardiff... - Mark/Jay oneshot, Part 3, 22 Ju Thu 23 Jul 2009, 4:22 pm | |
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